The Strange CD

I have a Creepypasta I wrote up today, based off an incident that happened last year. Now, summary is, I went to work, and a coworker asked me if I was still into one of my favorite shows. When I responded yes, he showed me a CD with a title written crudely on there, as well as an empty CD packet. Both were kinda strange, and I joked how it felt like I was in my own little Creepypasta. From there, the idea kinda took off. It does have quite a few cliches, but that's because of how I wanted it to be written. Any way I can post it up here and maybe get some positive feedback, and any ways to iron it out constructivly, so it can become a wiki here on this site? Please and thank you.